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Thrice Damned

A sorcerer with evil intentions or just a murderer waiting for another fool?At a crossroads, the characters come across a trio of thick poles set into the ground, just outside the overlapping roads.

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Crossbeams have been anchored to the poles, and from two poles dangle the bloody and beaten bodies of two men. A raven settles on the head of one of the still bodies, a faint call for help echoing from the other man. Standing at the center of the crossroads is a road-worn traveler, who keeps the brim of his hat down to protect from the glaring sun. As the group nears, he fondles a set of ebony dice in his hand. With a smirk, he points to the open pole and bids the lead character, 'care to try your luck?'

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  1. knowman

    Grammar correction/suggestion:

    Either '... the bloody and beaten bodies of a man dangles from two (of the) poles.' or '...the bloody and beaten bodies of men dangle from two (of the) poles.'

    There's a lot of suggestion in that, much of it wording, the only correction would be the men/a man bit.

    I didn't like this at first but have quickly warmed up to it, especially after figuring out it was a 100-word challenge. There is enough in that 100 words to give me a couple of different ways this could turn out.

    Cheers!

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    1. Kassy reply

      Ah, I didn't notice that, thank you for pointing it out to me. I'll change it to 'two men'.

      You're welcome.

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  2. Aramax

    nice adventure starter

    comment challange

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  3. valadaar

    Nice Hook! Great use of exactly 100 word, sans summary.

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