A Sundered Realm, flotsam of a world.
A realm of sundered reality - dead now, a maelstrom of shattered cultural artifacts and bones. Like a zero-gravity equivalent to the outcome of a massive Tsunami. Houses, boulders, globs of water and earth, the artifacts of a lost world, all floating, all surrounded by air.
Sunlight spears in from shards in the sky, which itself is a patchwork of thousands of skies. Some parts are clear blue, others hold pieces of the sun, moon(s) or other bodies. Storms and gentle showers, snow and hail.
Time itself advances in fits and spurts, occasionally even reversing. The direction is, however, towards greater and great entropy, and eventually all that will remain in the realm is scattered dust.
Treasures can be found in this floating graveyard, though the jumble of objects is very dangerous, and while the world is largely dead, there may still be _things_ lingering about, as chaotic and shattered as their world...
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A-Trill-ia, this seems a waste to go and destroy; but a Mad Warlock (Mal…
A-Trill-ia, this seems a waste to go and destroy; but a Mad Warlock (Male Witch) could make this a new layer of Limbo, if only he could gather a coven to do it...
Abner Vext has gathered three green hags, only seven more to go?
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The imageries work in this piece but I would rather like to see it expanded. Currently, it's a great flavour/inspiration piece but I think there's more potential to it. Still, one can't expect too much from an Oekaki.
4/5 Ok I'm a sucker for short pieces that have potental and there is JUST enough here to warrent a 4, thou I would love to see where you COULD take this........