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The Thunder Sphere

An unusual set of armor.

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Appearance

A set of five thick steel rings -- two small, two medium and one large -- linked together in a sort of chain. Script in a forgotten language runs along the inside of each. Beyond that, there is nothing whatsoever to mark these rings as special or magical in any way.

Benefit

When the rings are worn properly (one on each wrist, one on each ankle and one on the head like a circlet), the bearer is completely protected from lightning and all electricity attacks. Indeed, they will tend to draw such attacks to them. Furthermore, after lightning has been absorbed by one of the rings, it will spread out around the user’s body to form a visible shield of electricity, which crackles around the wearer in a sphere. This shield will provide some safety against physical attacks by dealing damage to those that get too close, though it cannot actually block damage. Ranged weapons are still effective, of course.

Hidden Benefits

By bringing the rings on both wrists together and aiming with his/her arms, the wearer may be able to intentionally discharge a bolt of electricity in a desired direction. This, of course, depends on whether the rings have received any charges from an outside source. The strength of this attack also depends on the strength of the stored charge, and using it will deplete the shield an equal amount.

Drawback

The wearer will never be able to walk about during a thunderstorm undetected -- pretty much every bolt of lightning will be drawn unerringly to the user who will then build up a massive charge. There’s also a limit to how much of a energy this system can conntain, so expect the rings to start discharging in random directions after absorbing too much electrical energy. If the rings begin to glow blue, the point of random discharge should be close.

In a game with technology that relies on any sort of electricity, this set is going to be a major nuisance. The wearer will unintentionally soak in electricity from any source that is exposed, and may discharge accidentally into nearby electronics, cooking them as with an EMP pulse.

Lore

The Thunder Sphere has been linked to events of disaster and upheaval for much of the past three millennia, though no one is exactly sure of its origin. For example, during the Summer of Storms over a millennium ago, the Thundersphere is said to have caused the devastation of a whole battalion of battle-hardened troops, turning the tide of the Kings’ War.

In another instance, The Great Fire of Amestris was purported to have been started by a foreigner who was capable of shooting lightning from his fingertips. Legend says that the man was driven insane by the death of a close friend, and that not even the electric prods of the city guard could put him down. Half the city was in flames before he was killed by a stray arrow, but what happened to the Thunder Sphere after that is unknown.

Twist

The ring set looks nothing like a sphere, of course, and it can be fairly tricky to figure out how to get them apart at first. The key lies with the inscription on each ring. If translated poorly from the original language, the inscription on a given ring might read something like “Left Arm of the Thunder Sphere” or “Crown of the Thunder Sphere”. Sliding your hand through one of the “Arm” rings will cause it to separate from the other rings and constrict around the wearer’s arm, resizing itself to him. When the rings are worn properly and the lightning shield comes up for the first time, it should be plain that the user himself is the Thunder Sphere, not the set of rings.

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  1. Cheka Man

    A shocking submission, and very orginal, the most orginal way of shooting lightning bolts I've ever seen. I would not want someone wearing this to come too close to my computer.

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  2. Dossta

    Update: Broke the name into two parts, 'cause I liked it better that way.

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  3. Redgre

    I really like the overall idea and concept, reminicent of the old Spiderman villian, Electro. However, the thing I'm having a hard time wrapping my mind around is how one 'wears' this five link chain. It seems awkward at best. It reminds me of full body shackles on an inmate, with perhaps less flexibility. I've read it a few times now and I still get stuck on this. Am I missing something?

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    1. Dossta reply

      That's explained in the last paragraph, though perhaps I should move it up or reword it somehow for clarity. The recipient of this item simply has to slide a hand (or foot) through the appropriate ring, and it will detach itself from the others and resize itself to fit him. If he takes the rings off at any time, they will be attracted to each other and automatically link back together.

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  4. Cheka Man

    I want this to win the Quest.

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    1. Dossta reply

      Thanks, Cheka. I'm flattered :)

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  7. dark_dragon

    I like those! I would totally see this being a campaign side-track, ith the five rings separated across the kingdom, to be reunited by the plucky PCs before taking on the big bad or going up the mountain to query the trhunder god.

    Good work Dossta!

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  8. Murometz

    I just love the image of someone donning these seeming 'shackles', as well as the image of someone drawing every last lightning bolt from a monstrous thunderstorm, (with hordes of stunned, wide-eyed onlookers nearby), as well as the image of an elecrical overload, and the consequent, disastrous discharges. Boy, thats a lot of images :) Like the Twist too! Also, what d_d said.

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  9. Morte

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  10. Phaidros

    Good item, I would only like some more on that history, with both heroes and villain (ab)using the Sphere. And who made this?

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  11. Wizard of Justice

    This item really captured my imagination and is removed from the typical idea of 'armour'.

    Great!

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  12. Moonlake

    The hidden benefit section provides really good imageries and overall, this sub seems more versatile in fitting into genres.

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  13. valadaar

    This is neat! And, a cruel DM might rule wearing an incomplete set would still draw the lightning, but you need all 5 to be protected....

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