[Deleted] Gandalf

1. [Deleted] Gandalf

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   Gandalf | wizard | Mage | leader protecter | Male | Author: flame [ Print NPC ] [ Edit Post ]
   
   This attaker never gives up to lead and protec the people
   and bring the people to peace
   
   
   Equipment
   crossbow Dagguer Sword Sniper Sheild Armor
   
   Appearance
   Tall rich good equipement strong stone hard to beat
   
   Background
   rivide from the dead and kiled 1 million people by stealing
   sniper from the dollar store
   
   Notes
   hi i have sniper
   | | Hits 1 | Added 12.16.03 11:07 | Votes 0 Rating 0
   

   
   
   What the hell... I mean, c'mon!

2. [Deleted] Gandalf

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   The background is pretty fleshed out but other then that it is pretty weak.
   
   I probably wouldn't have deleted it myself but hey, if in your judgement you think that it needed to be deleted then I suppose I just have to live with that decision.
   
   
   
   
   
   hehehehehe

3. [Deleted] Gandalf

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   Why delete? This is so excellent and fleshed out character, you could, you could... well, you or me could simply choke on this I guess. I was wondering what kind of trash will be Gandalf... now I know.
   
   
   I guess this is too bad even for the 'Rejects Database'. Correct me if I am wrong.

4. [Deleted] Gandalf

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   kiled 1 million people by stealing
   sniper from the dollar store
   
   Notes
   hi i have sniper
   

   
   
   This is just lame. I mean, we all know who gandalf is, and this is just a quick, thrown-together character with what the author thought was a cool name. No part of him is more than 2 sentances long. No thought pu into him, just "I want to be cool"
   
   Even what he wrote contradicts what he wrote. Rich, but he steals from the dollar store. And I guess he either looks like stone or is "stone hard to beat"
   
   There's no punctuation, a great lack of spelling, little decription, and no originality. I couldn't let this stand.

5. [Deleted] Gandalf

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   Aside from puctuation of this post, I think that Tolkein would have done much better if he had the hindsight of some of these brilliant ideas.
   
   I know, it is deleted off the main site so nobody else can enjoy them anymore, but think if he had a "Dagguer" instead of his staff and sword, oh, and the sniper from the dollar store, man. Could you imagine the Helm's Deep battle.
   
   His brilliance may be lost on some, but I see where he is going with this. Hopefully he will submit a plot using Gandalf and we can see what could have been.
   
   (Only one Hit. Just noticed how quickly it was caught. He didn't even look at it himself when it got deleted. hehehe)

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