feedback: A Shade of Grey

1. feedback: A Shade of Grey

   #1

   Compared to the previous version, this is a much stronger story with solid things for readers to latch on without getting too sentimental. Clarification issues have now been addressed. Next steps is to see how to properly balance between vague grey feel of the piece and making sure readers can feel for this gem of a piece.

2. Re: feedback: A Shade of Grey

   #2

   This story has gone apart from Aramax's original vision of this piece and he has relinquished revision rights to Axle and that is the status quo of his thinking on this piece right now.

3. Re: feedback: A Shade of Grey

   #3

   I think I'm ready to put the stamp of finished on this story. The use of poetry is pretty good in this story, adds a fair bit of depth and unpacks a lot of the general feelings of this story. I also like the fact that Grey comes out more in this version rather than being very 'grey' in previous ones.

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