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feedback: Lady down the hall

Started by Moonlake Jan 1, 2016 5 posts Locked

  1. feedback: Lady down the hall

    #1
    Muro: It's nutty in a good way. Reminiscent of the Rhialto the Marvelous books. Irreverent, unpleasant mages and their kicks :)
  2. Re: feedback: Lady down the hall

    #2
    I'll admit that I don't really get this story: not in a logical sense but in an emotional sense. I find it really hard to relate to this story on a personal level.
  3. Re: feedback: Lady down the hall

    #3
    More muro "perverse and clever" "Vance meets Anthony"
  4. Re: feedback: Lady down the hall

    #4
    I decided that this has a weird vibe of its own that could stand on its own and as such less editing is needed on this piece than I original thought.
  5. Re: feedback: Lady down the hall

    #5
    very glad

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