[X] Deleted- David The DragonSlayer

1. [X] Deleted- David The DragonSlayer

   #1

   David The DragonSlayer | Human with Dragon Blood flowing in his body | Cleric | When he emerged from the Body of the Dragon he cou | Male | Author: Dragoon1086
   
   A once Known Knight that had his Family killed by a huge Dragon
   
   
   Equipment
   The Sword of Dragon Fang 1d12(has a special Attack against Dragons and any reptilian Creatures
   
   Appearance
   Has a scaled covered left arm and hand that holds his Dragon Fang; his armor is Ancient compared too others but he wears it because his father and his Army used it so long ago.
   
   Background
   Born and raised around A Kingdom of Dragon Slayers and great Warriors and Marksmen; he was taught the ways of the Warrior by his Father and his greatest friends.
   At the age of 22 his Father's Kingdom was attacked by a huge Dragon that burn his home and place too the ground, with his Family murdered and everyone gone he took up his fathers sword and attacked the Dragon; the Dragon Swallowed David up and David layed there in the Dragons Stomach; being burned alive by the Dragon's Somach Fluids; but before his final breath his body began too glow a redness and suddenly he had a great strength he took his fathers sword once again and swung at the Dragons stomach and cut the huge Dragon in too; he Emerged not as simply David son of Michel the Great DragonSlayer but "David The Dragonman" he felt as if he was the Dragon himself; he look at his Left arm and it resembled the Arm of the Dragon; David wondered if this was suppose too happen, "Was this Dragon suppose too Swallow me and change me" or was I just too die like his Father; He walked too the Dragon's mouth and Took his bare hands and ripped one of the Dragons teeth out and walked away too. . . . . . .
   
   Notes
   it would be a amazing Character too meet will adventuring or even fight against it would be great too see what Players and DM will use him for
   | | Hits 9 | Added 08.17.03 19:50 | Votes 2 Rating 1.00
   

   
   
   No comment.
   
   
   As usual (usual?), give it a week or two, and if nothing significant changes about this character (or no one starts to like it for some mysterious reason), anyone feel free to delete it.

2. Thank you for posting this one....

   #2

   You saved me the trouble.
   
   I left some advice for the poster... but I doubt they will do anything.

3. [X] Deleted- David The DragonSlayer

   #3

   I need to get my ass in gear and make the "improvement needed" database.
   
   While some are easy to delete, this one is 'freshman' (excellent Moonhunter term) but actually looks like some effort has gone into it.
   
   Just a case, I would assume, of a young'n giving it a go and I feel guilty pushing it into oblivian.
   
   Give it a couple weeks but I imagine it will stay as is from either lack of effort to update it or this is the best effort.

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