The Handlers and the Abszurl

1. The Handlers and the Abszurl

   #1

   http://www.strolen.com/content.php?node=2997
   
   I got this idea from a Samuel Delany story ("Aye, And Gomorrah"), and I'm just not sure what to do with this. Is it fine like this? Or are there things I should talk? Are there things I have left out, or that should be changed?

2. Re: The Handlers and the Abszurl

   #2

   All cool stuff.
   
   Well, it wasn't said how these guys actually reproduce. Also, the other sub-clans were not described, while they sounded quite mysteriously.
   
   As for the Abszurl themselves, they seem to be just a little fan-group, so they should be more of an add-on to the clan, than an important part that defines them... but well, maybe they do. (If rockstars are also defined by groupies *shrugs* ;) )
   
   And for what could be further developed, there might be for instance the question on how they came to possess the monopoly on space travel, if you want to explore the history of the setting.
   
   
   And so on... just write up the rest of the setting and we'll see what we like. :)

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