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[DELETED] Rediscovering
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[DELETED] Rediscovering
#1It is incomplete enough that it may still be edited.
Rediscovering | Setting: City | Class: Any | Author: Artemis [ Print Plot ] [ Edit Post ]
Only few remain in this forgotten city. Orcs and few actual residents remain in the city of Loritha. A group of three sits around a fire, unmoving, speaking quietly..
Only few remain in this forgotten city. Orcs and few actual residents remain in the city of Loritha. A group of three sits around a fire, unmoving, speaking quietly.. A noise is heard outside, just an orc looting around. The mage laughs at what his companion said and looks around as he feels another enter the city, just a lowly elf. They continue talking while the new stranger wanders around this forgotten city. Are memories returning? -
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#2Taxus Submitted: 09.11.04 15:34
So basically... What? There's no actual plot, no information in this. I can see you have an idea of something, but you certainly don't show it to others with this post. Edit it and give us details about the city, how the PC's got there, what does it mean if "memories are returning" etc. etc. etc. etc. This lacks everything.
1/5
EchoMirage Submitted: 09.11.04 15:58
So .. we have got an abandoned city whre .. what the hell happens there? I wanna give a zero. All those 'ruthless half drow/half jelly doughnut assassins are better than this...
1/5
CaptainPenguin Submitted: 09.11.04 19:31
Huh?
I don't get it.
What is this supposed to signify? Why is the city empty? Who are the people sitting around the fire? Why is the elf "lowly"?
WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!!
Flesh this out.
I haven't even voted, because my vote is a...
0/5.
Scrasamax Submitted: 09.12.04 14:18
0/5
Royal_Assassin Submitted: 09.14.04 13:09
Wow. WTF! So plain and so plain. It is very boring. Give details and background info and tell us what is going on. Please!
0/5
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