[Deleted] Azur Chain

1. [Deleted] Azur Chain

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   http://www.strolen.com/items/viewitem.php?item_id=291&offset=&order=&dir=&index=1
   
   Another week...
   
   

   Azur Chain | Type: Chain_Armor | A bluish sliver chain mail made out of clear cryst | Author: Balmore of azur sky
   
   An eon after the spliting of azur sky into the empire of thain and the kingdom of azur sky the hero balmore ventured to the ancient city of theld once a florishing metopolis the city had fallen many eons ago and was now crawling with creatures of the darkness. After storming the black gates to the great city balmore sent the troops of azur sky back home alone he marched into the city holding his longsword lunato venus high the great tower was a dark silverish gray aginst the horizon the sun would soon set and the shadows would then come the lich kingthat now ruled this place would send his minions to kill him. As the sky darkend lunato venus started to shine with its orange light sudenly the light started getting dimmer and balmore saw thousands of red eyes in the darkness he held his sheild high and waited sudenly a wave of darkness came at him hi slashed at it severing it from the main mass of shadow as it creeped back into the shifting mass of evil a wave of fear washed over balmore he shook it off and contiued the stand of until dawn as soon as the suns light passed over the horizon balmore colapsed into a heap he was battered and badly wounded. He arose around miday to find his wounds healed and a suit of chain mail next to him it was made of azur and gave of a blueish light he doned it and found that undead could not touch him
   
   
   The azur chain is a powerful magic item it is as light as a cloak due to the fine links of azur used it feels like a bluish cloth and the wearer counts as wearing no armor.
   azur chain stats are: armor bonus +11 max dex bonus +20
   armor check penalty -0 arcane spell failure 1% + spell level
   speed normal speed weight 3 lbs it is unbreakable
   
   Magical Properties:
   azur chain acts as a circle of protection evil and undead at all times it gives of a blue light equal to that of a candle (5ft radius)this light restores 1 hit point a round to all good creatures within it the wearer of the azur chain restores 5 hit points a round and changes their hair color to a light blue and grants them a resitance of 10 to fire water earth and lighting
   the chain mail has a overwhemling aura of good
   no mortal can create another suit due to azur's hardness and the craftmanship it is an artifact.
   some rumors say that a god created the suit for balmore these seem to prove true but the one who crated it is unknown.
   | | Hits 65 | Added 04.02.04 13:47 | Votes 6 Rating 1.00

2. [Deleted] Azur Chain

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   6 votes and all 1's!
   
   Yhea, this thing needs work, and has been commented on to no avail.
   
   Also, it reminds me way too much of a horrible book I just read "The Knight" Guy spends the whole book questing after a sword so he can be with the elf queen he's in love with, picks it up out of a pool of water in the last six pages and ride off into the sky to be with some other chick. ACK!
   
   Its too powerful even for an artifact and gives great power fo free.

3. [Deleted] Azur Chain

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   I swear...if I see one more "azur" item......

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