[x] Deleted Ninjas crawling in.

1. [x] Deleted Ninjas crawling in.

   #1

   Jagz something, and that other one.
   
   I really, really hate this kind of characters. Wow, its a ninja. Wow, he killed all the demons, 'cause they killed his family or clan or something, where he was taught all the superpowers (OK, he trained a bit somewhere, and got two most powerful swords on the planet, but who cares). Now he is even more cool, and it looks like he must be tomorrow still cooler than yesterday.
   
   Yaaaaaawn.
   
   
   This character is so depressing I could hardly scroll down the page to vote against it. Now I vote for deleting. Anyone sees at least a single tiny reason why it should stay?

2. [x] Deleted Ninjas crawling in.

   #2

   7 + 3 + 2 = 15? Ninja outfit but does nothing ninja like? Half-demon demon hunter but swears revenge on his families death? Delete.

3. die! die! die!

   #3

   Jagz Slayer | 1/2 Human, 1/2 Demon | Other | Bounty Hunter/ Demon Slayer | Male | Author: Red SJ [ Print NPC ] [ Edit Post ]
   
   Whole family and clan killed because of his foolish trust in one demon.
   
   
   Equipment
   The Malicious Treasure Spirit Of Unbridled Destruction, The Apocalypse
   
   Appearance
   Wears Ninja Outfit and trainig coat. Weighted
   wears the Apocalypse on his back.
   
   Background
   Name: Jagz Hajime Hazanko Anemis Gainax Shinomori Soujirou Slayer
   
   Age: 26
   
   Alias (alternate Name): Jagz Slayer
   
   Skin Color: Dark tan
   
   Gender: Male
   
   Hair: Short, black, curly
   
   Height: 6’0�
   
   Weight: 158 pounds
   
   Race: ½ Human, ½ Demon
   
   Class: Demonslayer, Bounty Hunter
   
   Languages Spoken: Common and Underworld
   
   Alignment: Neutral (has his own sense of justice)
   
   Physical description, clothes: Wears ninja outfit with a weighted training jacket.
   
   Residence: Often found wandering, however has a base at the J.A.G.Z. (Jinsengumi Assassins Guild Zeta) Organization.
   
   Social Status: The best demonslayer ever. He is well known as the leader of J.A.G.Z. Lately he has not been active and is being vastly under-estimated. It is rumored that he has lost all of his fighting skill and is merely a figurehead.
   
   Background Information: Jagz was born into a demonslayers clan. He was trained to use an assassin’s blade and other demonslaying weapons. While raised to believe that all demons were bad, he was befriended by a small demon. When his parents found out that he was friends with a demon, they punished him severely and ordered him to stop talking to it. Jagz secretly kept his friendship. One night, his clan was having an assembly. Jagz told his demon friend about it.
   
   That night, Jagz was enjoying the ceremony, but he wondered where his friend was. While listening, he had heard some of the adults mention a demon-repelling barrier. Jagz immediately rushed to the edge of the area and, with his own power, opened a section of the powerful barrier that the elder himself erected. As soon as Jagz dropped the barrier, a horde of demons rushed in and slaughtered his clan. Jagz rushed to find his family. He found them just in time to see his own demon friend killing them. The demon looked Jagz right in the eye and laughed. He leapt away laughing, ordering that no one kill him. At that very moment; Jagz swore on his family’s life that he would rid all demons from existence; he would get his own revenge by killing every demon he found. A killer was born that day. Jagz was 7 years old.
   
   Three years later, Jagz was training with a master of the Gatotsu Style. The man’s name was Hajime Saito. Jagz fought secretly alongside Saito’s organization, the Shinsen Gumi. Jagz quickly became a formidable user of both a katana and the Gatotsu Style. After two more years of training and fighting, Jagz left the Shinsen Gumi. Jagz was 15 years old.
   
   For two years, Jagz could not be located. As the sole survivor of his clan, Jagz was sought after for the secret magic and arts that his clan possessed. Jagz was on Mount Apocalypse. While undergoing his strenuous solitary training, he accidentally stumbled upon the two legendary weapons, the Apocalypse and the Har-Megedon. While the Apocalypse seemed to gravitate toward him, the Har-Megedon clearly rejected him as its wielder. While Jagz trained with the Apocalypse, he kept the Har-Megedon anyway. Jagz left the mountain, as he felt that he had disturbed its natural aura. He had. As soon as he removed the swords, the environment changed to suit what was conceived as the ideal training grounds of the wielders. Jagz was 17 years old.
   
   Jagz had successfully rid the human world of all demons. Now he wanted to get to and eliminate the demon world. As Jagz continued to travel and search for a way to access the demon world, the leader of an organization told him he was its destined leader. Because Jagz had nothing to lose, he accepted the position. It was only later that he discovered the Makai portal the headquarters possessed. While enjoying his new and well-respected position as the leader of J.A.G.Z., he fought with a talented young ninja. His name was Red. He offered Red a position in the Org., but he refused. Two weeks later, Red came back for the position. Jagz did not know why the change of heart, but he gladly gave him the position.
   
   After some years, Red decided to leave J.A.G.Z. Though Jagz tried to talk him out of it, Red was determined. Red had found what he wanted, he said, and now had personal business to tend to. As a parting gift, Jagz gave Red the other sword that he found on Mount Apocalypse, the Har-Megedon. Strangely, the Har-Megedon reacted to Red the same way the Apocalypse reacted to Jagz. Red left swiftly, leaving Jagz contemplating the situation. In addition, a mysterious force was slowly making Jagz lose his humanity to rather demonic habits…
   
   Now, Jagz is remarkably close to mastering the sword Apocalypse. According to legend, when mastered, the sword unleashes the world destroying technique, Cataclysm. However, according to legend, the sword can only be mastered by a union of both human and demonic powers. He has mastered his own altered version of the Gatotsu Style. His assassin’s blade has been altered and modified to the point of a weapon that could cut through steel with the greatest of ease. He has also mastered the assassin’s style. Through training, Jagz has gained access to Mount Apocalypse’s training grounds. His energy and spiritual techniques have been perfected, and he has the ability not only to use a soul’s undying energy, but to actually imprison and manipulate them.
   
   Equipment/ Personal items: Assassin’s Blade, katana, and the Malicious Treasure Spirit of Unbridled Destruction, the Apocalypse.
   
   Character Strength: Ninja and demonslayers Techniques, fast and silent movement. A secret, unknown connection to the Shinsen Gumi.
   
   Character Weakness: His past and the memory of his family.
   
   
   Notes
   character can use both Human and Demon energy. when killing a demon, can take soul and feed it to himself for energy and other things.
   
   
   and lest we forget
   
   Red SJ | Human | Other | Bounty Hunter/ Manslayer | Male | Author: Red SJ [ Print NPC ] [ Edit Post ]
   
   Family and clan killed by sabotage. Can harness and drain souls of their energy.
   
   
   Equipment
   The Holy Treasure Soul Stealing Sword, Har-Megedon.
   Two especially powerful souls, Bluendrion and Greenaro.
   
   Appearance
   Ninja Outfit with long training jacket. Weighted.
   Carries The Har-Megedon on his back.
   
   
   Background
   Name: Rednaxela Suiluj
   
   Age: 24
   
   Alias (Alternate Name): Red SJ
   
   Skin Color: Tanned
   
   Gender: Male
   
   Hair: Short, straight, black
   
   Height: 6’0�
   
   Weight: 160 pounds
   
   Race: Human
   
   Class: Bounty Hunter/ Manslayer
   
   Languages Spoken: Common and Underworld
   
   Alignment: Neutral (whichever side has the prettier women)
   
   Physical Description, Clothing: Form-fitting pants and undershirt. Weighted training long coat. Wears ninja shoes. (Soundless)
   
   Residence: Wanderer, none.
   
   Social Status: Known as a Master assassin, but managed to change his outward appearance enough as to not be recognized by all but his closest acquaintances.
   
   Background information: Red is a rogue ninja. He was born into a secluded clan that possessed an ancient, forbidden magic. The day before his initiation into a full-fledged ninja, (and his learning the ancient magic), his clan was attacked. In a flash of self-preservation, he grabbed the scrolls that contained the magic and ran. To his knowledge, he is the only one to survive. He was 14 years old, and the only weapons he was trained to use were the Kunai Knives and the Kunai Sword.
   
   Two and a half years later, Red was confronted with a problem. He had managed to translate the ancient text of the scrolls, but every spell in it required the undying energy of consenting human souls. Unfortunately, every time he killed a human, or came across a battleground, the souls refused to be participants of his rituals. Apparently, his reputation spread. The leader of a powerful slayers organization offered him a high-ranking position if he wished to join. Red turned down his offer. However, within two weeks, Red saw how useless his search was. In an act of desperation, he sought out the organization and spoke to its leader. Red joined the organization. Its name was J.A.G.Z. Red was 18 years old.
   
   In his service to J.A.G.Z., Red discovered two spirits, Bluendrion and Greenaro. Blue was a master tactician in life. Green was a highly exalted and feared warrior. They were both killed with sneaky and underhanded tactics. Their murderer was the same. They agreed to travel with Red, for they wished to seek their killer and take their revenge through the medium of Red. Red now had what he needed to perform his ritual and inherit the legacy of his clan. He left the J.A.G.Z. to seek revenge for the death of his family and friends. He has deemed himself a true shinobi. Red was 21 years old.
   
   When the leader of J.A.G.Z. tried to talk Red out of leaving and failed, he gave Red a parting gift in which to remember the organization by. The leader of J.A.G.Z. had trained on Mount Apocalypse, and had accidentally found and retrieved two of the most powerful weapons on the planet; he gave one of these to Red, the Har-Megedon. While he could wield one of the weapons, The Leader just could not seem to successfully wield this specific sword. According to legend, anyone who masters this sword can unleash the world-destroying technique, Armageddon. It has also been rumored that Red has trained with the Onmitsu Oniwa Banshuu and is close friends with its leader, Aoshi Shinomori.
   
   Now, three years later, Red is well acquainted with his spirits and sword, and though he still has much to do to perfect his magic, his physical fighting skills are extraordinary. Aside from the Kunai weapons, he now wields spiritual power, assisted by Blue and Green, and the highly underestimated weapons acupuncture needles. About six inches long in length and a ½-inch wide, these needles can be charged with energy (spiritual, magical, or kinetic) and thrown. In addition, Green and Blue seem to have lost their passion for taking revenge on their killer. The only ties to this world that they have now are their loyalty and affection for Red.
   
   Through intense training and preparation, Red has also gained the power to access the mental/physical region, the Shadow Realm. He does this through use of his own mental strength and use of intense concentration through a medium. Although an astonishing fighter, he has yet to avenge his clan. He now wanders almost aimlessly, seeking clues to his goal.
   
   Equipment/ Personal Items: Kunai Knives, Kunai Sword, Throwing Needles, Blue and Green, a set of double Kodachi’s, and the Holy Treasure Soul Stealing Sword, the Har-Megedon.
   
   Character strength: Ninja techniques and extremely fast, silent movement. Unknown Relation to the Onmitsu Oniwa Banshuu Clan and its leader, Aoshi Shinomori.
   
   Character weakness: Exploitation of his previous relations with anybody he cares for.
   
   
   
   Notes
   extremely serious fighting style. his ability to charge objects with energy requires both concentration and a vast amount of spiritual strength. he often loses fights for the sole reason of the memories of his past. another downfall is his respect for women. he's never killed a woman. and he doesnt plan to.

4. [x] Deleted Ninjas crawling in.

   #4

   Thank you.
   
   My soul is relieved.

5. [x] Deleted Ninjas crawling in.

   #5

   Looks like a lot of writing. Didn't waste my time on it since there is such backing for the deletion.

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