[Deleted] Winged sword

1. [Deleted] Winged sword

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   The winged sword | Type: Large_Sword | A long sword with wings on the handle | Cursed | Author: kalabar [ Print Item ] [ Edit Post ]
   
   With this sword you way fly like an angel...
   
   
   A long sword, with a black wing on the right side of the andel, and a white wing on the other side of the handel.This swords blade is the same but the black side on the left side and the white on the right side.
   
   Magical Properties: This item is cursed.
   Magical
   This sword may give you the power to become a demon or an angel.
   Cursed
   When you use this sword it jraines your life for each time you hit something.
   | | Hits 16 | Added 02.07.04 20:20 | Votes 2 Rating 3.00
   Awesome one! Hope I can use it Pretty Darn Good Alright Idea Shows some promise Didn't Like it
   Comments
   CaptainPenguin Submitted: 02.07.04 21:34 [ EDIT ]
   
   *Grinds his teeth*
   
   Let's begin.
   First of all, your spelling and grammar. Ugh.
   -"A long sword, with a black wing on the right side of the andel, and a white wing on the other side of the handel." C'mon, man. That should be:
   "A long sword with a black wing on the right side of the handle and a white wing on the other side of handle."
   -Where's the creativity? No backstory, boring powers, munchkin-munchkin-munchkin.
   
   1/5. The verdict is Guilty. This item is hereby sentenced to eternity in suckiness for being a sucky, sucky item.
   CaptainPenguin Submitted: 02.07.04 21:35 [ EDIT ]
   
   Also, I'd like to point out that Kalabar gave his own item a 5/5, so I don't feel sorry for being so mean.
   Last of all: "jraines". I have nothing more to say about this item.

2. [Deleted] Winged sword

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   1: Fix your spelling and grammar. This should take one, maybe two, minutes.
   
   2: Becoming an angel or demon for an unspecified amount of time is overpowerful. Think of some more balanced alternatives.
   
   3: Why was this sword made? Who made it? What was thier intent? Why does any god allow any mortal to become either a demon or angel? What's the story? When you can work on these answers, you will have a better idea what the sword can do.
   
   Lastly, Voting on your own item is not honorable. Let your peers judge your submissions for themselves.

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